martes, 29 de abril de 2014

Correction of the dairy entry

Dear diary:

In England, one day of  December of 1843 in Manchester, a very cold morning my neighbor was looking at me because I was croussing the street and he was very scared about my vulture eye.

Another daay I suspect John (my neighbor) looking to the window of my house and I deduced that he was searching to me because he wanted to kill me.

On Wednesday I am writing in my dairy all the things that I felt about John, every hour and every minute he was looking at me, I suspect that he is planning with what and when he was going to kill me.

Then on Thursday I was looking at John and he is taking photos and focussing on my eye because I felt that he was doing a albumof all my information about my eye.

martes, 22 de abril de 2014

Dear mr CEO,


Im writing to you because I' don't  agree of the notice that you published that because you said that de people of the airplanes are terrorists but you don't confirm.
I claim to you because is not concrete that all the tripulation are terrorists and know you are wrong because you are not sure of wath you are said

lunes, 24 de marzo de 2014

I  was published on the street because I funded more attractive.

The message is that my cell phone is "enjoy your life with the cell phone of Ronnie Colleman, because you can fell more attractive.

The target audience will be the people of fifteen years old, because they used a lot like every day.

My stereotype that I used is a person with muscles because is more attractive on the street.

I choose pathos because this advertisement is very motivational and he said that cell phone is the best.
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miércoles, 27 de noviembre de 2013

Oral presentation

My caption: ¨Video games dont make kids violent".

My picture: 

In class I was learned that the video games yes it make kids violent but it is depended on the game that she played.

Source1: The researches found that the behavior of the kids is very violent anda know on the actually they invent some knew games to calm the react of  bullying and aggresive behaviors.

Source2: However, many of the studies use different methods to measure aggression, many of which lack a clear connection to violent behaviour.

My opinion to my caption: First I dont like the video games because I founded bored and yes its makes kids violent because they dont go out of her house, they play all the day with video games and special that if contain violence.

The most important ideas are: 
  • All the kids and the people that play video games they need to top and o and enjoyed the beautiful life and do sports.
  • Have anormal life and enojeyed with friends going to partys and dont play video games.
  • Not play all the day, do you need to change.

miércoles, 20 de noviembre de 2013

Letter of complaint

Dear director,

I am Lorenzo anda I write to you, because I didnt like that my little sister o watched cartoons that include plenty of violent and brutal scenes. In one part I dont like this action, because on future my sister can apply this thing on future, for example on the school can hit someone or something like that.

Secondly, all the cartoons that she sees include plenty of violence, in my case is a women and on the future she will not going to have good abits. She always will react with violence and also with my family, I dont like your cartoons to younger people.

Thirdly, my sister spend almost all the day watching cartoons and she dont socialized with any one of my parents.

Finally, you nned to changed this cartoons, you can put like (this cartoons are from eigtheen years old).


Thankful,

Lorenzo Aste.

jueves, 7 de noviembre de 2013

Glogster

http://www.glogster.com/loroo/poster-glog-by-loroo/g-6kd2b62u9d18a7vuk4jd0in?s=imgglog

lunes, 4 de noviembre de 2013

Opinion piece

Opinion piece

In my opinion social status tattoos are not of my person, because that is not represent me on the cultural aspects. However all the people that have tattoos on his body its represent on your conduct, and physicall aspects.

I agree with the people that think on the centuary before, because when someone doe a tattoo the people react like it is very bad on the perspective of representative physicall aperience.

Secondly when you are on a job that represents you formal, and one day the boss look some part of your body and do you have a tatto, like in the neck for example its represent you on a bad personality aspect of some of respect for your job.

thirdly know on the present, the people that do a tattoo are because of a tradition or his customs. I think that the social status are dont interested.

Finally I still thinking that the tattoos represents you bad in all the aspects, specially the social status.